Silver is white and gold yellow
Up the sky and earth below
Noon is bright and night calm
Dawn is fresh and morning warm
Eager to learn and eager to earn
Essential for life to take a turn
Progress should be aim, mind always
Path is lengthy, difficult are ways
Reach the destination, overcome obstacles
Enable capacities, ignore troubles
Easy would be then, days to come
Think of tomorrow, never succumb
Ideas are many, see a dream
Victory is yours if you work extreme
Action should be sincere and bona fide
Remember to see positive side
Alone we come and alone we go
Dazzle for a while and then go
Beautiful poem -simple,succinct -it goes straight to the heart.The last two sentences give the meaning of life and of existence.But I would suggest inclusion of the word "we" forming as it were the prefix to last sentence.This would strenghen the rhythmic aspect.
ReplyDelete